MCTC Writing Center Training Video Step 5

These are really, really strong because, if we look back at this sort of thesis statement that we're working with, you said that this sort of racism is validated by the U.S. Government Right here, yeah, Arizona Law SB 1070 at the state level: Government. National level: the Dream Act is opposed: government is supporting racist policies. Totally right. That's a really strong thesis statement. Fernando: Thanks. I can see that you're building to this point, but when you make this point make sure you've got data to back it up for real. But yeah, that's like... that's so crucial. I think... you kind of strike me as a bit of a "freewrite" kind of guy you already came to me with such good thoughts that I feel like we actually did is we sort of... disciplined and ordered your thoughts. You were already supporting your main idea. And so we kind of did stuff here but I really wanna... after you do these freewrites just challenge yourself to look at where you're already supporting your main idea in these really cool ways. Not everything is totally developed, not everything is totally perfect it doesn't have to be right now. Fernando: Yeah, I have a problem with that cause I don't... I am a perfectionist, so I don't like to turn things in that are not good. Vince: That's not necessarily a bad thing.